如何使托福作文更加地道

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如何使托福作文更加地道

如何使自己的托福作文写作更加地道化?出国留学网托福作文栏目整理了以下内容，欢迎参考!

我们常常在看老外的文章时会发现，他们的一篇文章用，名词出现的概率相当的高。不仅如此，对名词喜爱的程度更是到了把动词都要名词化，而且经常性的使用抽象名词，因此在写作时，如果能够投其所好，自然能够得到加分。

简单说，名词化即是动词或形容词被用作名词的现象。比如动词转成名词：discovery->discovery， move->movement， refuse->refusal，又比如形容词转成名词：careless->carelessness， difficult->difficulty， intense->intensity。那么什么情况下，我们需要进行名词化呢?

A.谓语动词的宾语部分

原句：I do not know either what she meant or what he intends.

名词化：I do not know either her meaning or his intentions.

B.结合被动形式

原句：If people decide without enough persuasive information，...

名词化：If a decision is made without enough persuasive information，...

C.取代诸如从句中“the fact that”的用法

原句：The fact that I denied what he accused me of impressed the jury.

名词化：My denial of his accusations impressed the jury.

更好的名词化：a. When I denied his accusations， I impressed the jury.

b. In denying his accusations， I impressed the jury.

D.名词化部分用在there is/are的后面

原句：We demand that the government stop taxing entertainment.

名词化：There is a demand for an end to taxation on entertainment.

原句：The floods considerably eroded the land.

名词化：There was considerable erosion of the land from the floods.

然而，有些时候，在我们的新托福写作方式中认为理所应当使用“名词化”时，老外认为是没有必要的。比如：

A. 名词化部分跟在动词后面

原句(名词化“冗余”)：The police conducted an investigation into the matter.

改后：The police investigated the matter.

B.名词化部分作为主语

原句：Our discussion is concerned with a tax cut.

改后：We discussed a tax cut.

C.连续进行名词化

原句：a. First， she reviewed the evolution of the dorsal fin.

b. There was a first a review of the evolution of the dorsal fin.

改后：First， she reviewed how the dorsal fin evolved.

D.连接部分名词化

原句：Their cessation of hostilities was because of their personnel losses.

改后：They ceased hostilities because they lost personnel.

原句：The instability of the motor housing did not preclude the completion of the field trials.

改后：Even though the motor housing was unstable， the research staff completed the field trials.

因为中国的传统习惯是在组句中以动词为主，因此在新托福写作的过程中，如何转到地道的表达对大家来说可能是一件比较困难的一件事，不过任何事情只要做了，就有可能发生。相信同学们勤加苦练必然能有所收获。

托福独立写作范文:工作比生活环境更影响你的幸福感?

托福独立写作题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Your job has more effect on your happiness than your living environment does.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

参考范文

For a truly peaceful existence, a person needs both a comfortable and satisfying career, as well as a happy living environment. However, one’s living environment is probably more important for contentment than one’s job, because people spend far more time at home than they do at word, and it is easier to change jobs than living environments.

One way of judging the impact a certain factor has on our lives is by looking at how much time we spend exposed to it. In this sense, there’s no contest between the career and living environment: even the hardest-working employees still spend the majority of their time at home.Even if problems occur on the job, most people try of put those problems aside when they get to their house or apartment. People eat, sleep, bond with friends and family, and relax in their homes.My mother sometimes works as many as sixty hours per week, but still gets to relax when she gets home each night. Despite working so many hours, she still spends the majority of her time in her own house.Since we experience the majority of our happy time at home, it is obvious that living environment affects us more than our job.

Another reason living environment is more crucial to happiness than career is that it is much more difficult to change our home environment than it is a job.Most people only change apartments or house at most once a year, due to lease agreements and mortgages. However, changing jobs or companies is much easier, and more common. Changing living situations requires more planning and commitment.When I had to transfer to a new city for my career, it was much harder to deal with my living situation than to get settled into a new position at work.Due to relative difficulty associated with changing one’s home environment as opposed to changing one’s job, it should be abundantly clear just how important said home environment is to our overall happiness.

Home is our comfort zone, the place where we unwind and relax. Home life affects our happiness more than career. After all, because of the amount of time spent at home as well as the difficulty of changing homes, the place we choose to live is often the very cornerstone of our entire lives.

2017.02.25托福独立写作范文:一个人的衣着可以看出或显示出其性格?

2017年2月25托福独立作文： Do you agree or disagree with following statement that the way of a person's dress is an Indication of his or her personality or character?

题目翻译：你是否同意下面的说法：一个人的衣着可以看出或显示出其性格

本期机经查看：2017年2月25日托福真题回忆

分析：旧题重复(V2011.05.28; 2013.06.15;2014.12.14)

立论：穿衣方式足一个人个性、人品的体现。

【理由】： 1. 整洁展现效率。

2. 颜色显示专业度。

2017年2月25托福独立范文：

Traditionally, dresses were manufactured to keep privacy. Therefore, many are inclined to believe that clothes serve as nothing but fig leaves. Be that as it may, I cannot agree with this statement. The way a person dressed strongly indicates his or her personality. I intend to have further illustrations in the following aspects.

Granted that we obtain a little from others' outfit. It is, more often than not, the limited spare time that results in the awful dress style. A person who stays up all night to finish the project before the deadline wears pajamas outside because of his responsibility. In this situation, we are too quick to define him just because of his appearance. However, this situation is rare. Different dress styles basically demonstrate ones' personality.

First, dressing neatly usually suggests high efficiency. It is not difficult to imagine doctors with the neat suit will certainly make their patients relax. Usually, a patient in the first treatment will be naturally accompanied with great mental tension. Seeing the doctors wearing neat dress, they tend to have the first impression that the doctors are professional and trustworthy. Hence, they tend to cooperate with doctors, which will definitely ensure the efficiency of treatment. By contrast, few patients would have guts to receive treatment if the doctors, dressed in rags, seem not to be very professional.

Furthermore, the color of varied dressing styles can dictate different personalities. It is widely acknowledged that dark colors give an aura of authority, while lighter pastel shades suggest approachability. If a candidate, wearing a green T-shirt and a pair of red trousers, takes an interview for bank clerks, I deem that the chance of surviving the interview is slim, because unappropriated wearing means informality at the first sight. What he wears indicates that the job candidate does not like to follow the routine, which will convey the message of unconformity to clients. In contrast, if he wears dark dress for the interview, he will deliver a sense of conformity and decency to employers and customers. That is the reason why In order to deliver the message that their employers are kind and easy-going, we witness that so many clerks working in the bank wears dark or lighter colors clothes.

In general, by observing the ways a person dressed, we have the basis to get to know his character since distinct people's styles can give us the clues of people's personalities. Thus, I agree with the statement.

托福独立写作范文：Some people prefer to ask others for help

Some people prefer to ask others for help; others prefer to solve the problem with their own knowledge. Which is your choice?

托福独立写作范文：

Such is human nature that everyone longs for happiness in our life. Unfortunately, on the path to pursue happiness, we are likely to face various problems. How to solve them? Should we rely on ourselves to remove the obstacle or turn toothers for a cure?From my perspective, it is more reasonable to ask others for help.

Admittedly, always hinging on others to solve problems might be irrational in some cases. For example, if you ask an acquaintance with whom you haven’t a close tie to lend you a hand, he might be reluctant, because most of us have our own care and concern. Besides,some people are unwilling to shoulder the responsibility for the advice they offer. It’s not a rare case when we ask our friend for advice on what major to choose only to get a reply: “Well, it’s really hard to say. Who knows what your real interest is? Who knows what major will be popular when you graduate?”

In spite of the points mentioned above, I still cling to the idea that we should depend on others for the following reasons.

First of all, asking others for help can save us much valuable time, time that we can use for other purposes. As is known to all, most people in contemporary society are always burdened with endless stress and strain. To be admitted to prestigious universities, schoolchildren have to burn midnight oil to out do their peers in exams; likewise,university students can do nothing but to work against the clock to lend themselves an edge over others in the talent market so that they can land adecent job. Given the quickening pace of life, how can we expect us to remove all the obstacles only by ourselves?

In addition, turning to others for help is an efficient way for us to enlarge our circle of friends. It is not a rare case that friendship might be formed after we ask others for help. Take myself as an example. After helping me find a cure for my personal health problem, one of my colleagues has become my best friend. Now, when in trouble,he also asks for my advice. No wonder some even state that it is an efficient way to find friends by “bothering” others for their help.Sounds surprising?It is a discovery revealed inrecent research conducted by a group of leading experts.

Most importantly, it is the only choice to call for help when the solution to a problem requires expertise. Itis known to all that today’s society differs greatly from what it was before. Even a century ago, most folks could be self-sufficient: they grew grain on their own land and wove cloth on their own looms, which seems unimaginable in modern society. Unlike the “good old days”, modern society is a huge complex machine in which each person can serve only as a tiny part.For example, City dwellers depend on farmers for grainwhile farmers rely on factory workers for industrial products; in the same way, factory workers may temporarily drown our worries in soap operas shown on the screen while film-makers cannot have a film produced, however talented they might be, without the talents of play wrights,directors, photographers, actors or actresses.

Why not ask others for solution when necessary?Good or bad, this might be the best choice left to us.